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(2018年6月·浙江高考)It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle__Paul,__my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm__house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to hav
e breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草)．I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don’t be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get__lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight．It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.                                   
                                   
                                   
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.                                   
                                   
                                   
                                   
flowing的意思
写作流程
第一步：审题
1．审体裁：记叙文
2．审人称：第一、三人称
3．审时态：一般过去时
4．审所标出的关键词语：
表人物的有：dad, Uncle Paul
表事物的有：farm house, river, sheep, track, sight
表动作的有：feed, get lost
表时间的有：late
5．审前文大意：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验……
第二步：抓住段首句设问
续写段首1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.设问：
How would the horse react?
What would they do with the rabbit? 
What would happen after that?
…
续写段首2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.设问：
How did they feel?
What would they do?
How would they get back to the house? 
…
第三步：谋篇
1．第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写人的反应，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。
2．第二段首句We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场来写。
3．对所标出的关键词语进行分类并选择性地加以有效利用。同时灵活运用话题词汇：情感：panic, relief, nervous, worried；动作：run, cry, think to oneself；环境：shower, mountain, forest, valley, tree, lake, sun。
4．在确定了思路和内容之后，续写时，要注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
第四步：拟草稿并检查誊写
【参考范文1】
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it.After a while, we were completely lost in the forest.There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.“We may not be able to make it back to the farm__house in time for supper.” I thought to myself.After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest.And an unexpected shower added to our difficulty in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain.I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son.I remember there is a river near the farm house.Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it.Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.
【参考范文2】
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall.Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on！” All of a sudden the horse began to run.My dad tried to keep up behind us.For a few minutes my horse slowed down and then stopped beside a river．I looked around and realized that we were away off the track．

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