关于雅思写作成绩复议那些事
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    在雅思成绩出来后,很多烤鸭都有这样一个疑问:“我感觉自己口语发挥的不错,为什么分数这么差呢?”或者“明明考前曾遇到过类似的问题,为什么写作成绩这么低?”于是,在成绩出来后很多烤鸭都会百般纠结,到底要不要复议呢?尤其是只差那“可能的0.5”就可以拿到offer顺利出国的同学。一起来看看这篇文章吧!
    关于雅思成绩复议那些事
    在最近几次的雅思考试中,这样的情况不算少数:很多考生的听力、阅读分数都在7.5 上,可写作可能只有5分或者5.5分。甚至有考生的成绩出现以下情况:
    听力:8.0
    阅读:8.5
    写作:5.5
    口语:7.5
    总分:7.5
    这样的成绩的确很让人吃惊,因为雅思考试的各个项目是相通的,出现这样的情况基本可
以推断出:考官是故意压低了写作部分的成绩,这样的情况可以考虑申请复议。
    那么复议是否真的就一定能提高成绩?这里请看官方的说法:“如果考生希望对自己的雅思成绩进行重判,可以申请成绩复议服务。雅思考试拥有高标准的质量监控体系,作为最高标准的评分服务,成绩复议可以确保考生的英语水平得到精确的评判。”
    对于复议的流程,总结几点:
    1.复议只有一次机会,但却是可以确保考生的评分得到最高标准的最精确的公平判断;
    2.复议必须在考试后42天内保证雅思官方收到该申请单、成绩单原件和复议金人民币;
    3.复议期间成绩单不可用于申请学校,且复议提交申请成功后无法更改和取消;
    4.复议周期为六个星期,也就是说在六星期内可收到复议结果;
    5.复议成绩提高,退回1000大洋;若成绩不变或下降,则不退回钱款。
    雅思写作范文:汽车控制
    The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2022 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
    Should alternative forms of transport be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use?
    You should write at least 250 words.
    You should use your own ideas, knowledge and e某perience and support your arguments with e某amples and relevant evidence.
    There is general a greement that there are far too many automobiles crowding the roads nowadays. In fact, it is estimated that there will be as many as 29 million motor vehicles on British roads by the year 2022. Not only do these motor vehicles cause inconvenience in the form of traffic jams and accidents, they also contribute to the planet’s ever-worsening air pollution.
    In my opinion, we must encourage alternative forms of transport. If more people rode bicycles or traveled by public transport they would be healthier and suffer less from stress, the roads would be less congested and safer, and the air in our cities would be cleaner. An added benefit would be that people would have more money to spend on more people than private cars can, and subway systems, of course, take passengers off the streets entirely. Moreover, private cars are banned in the downtown areas,swheresthe only form of wheeled transport allowed is the bicycle.
    However, it is necessary that these efforts to improve the traffic situation be backed up by international laws to control the ownership and use of cars. This is because, first of all, pollution caused by automobiles is worldwide problem. Secondly, more people are traveling by car to other countries nowadays.
    If measures are taken in a planned way to encourage alternative forms of transportation, and international laws put in place to control car ownership and use, there is no doubt that the result will be safer roads, a healthier lifestyle and a less-polluted atmosphere.
    雅思写作范文:信息时代导致社会两极分化
    The age of Information Technology has taken a lot of people by surprise. While it has become a way of life for some, others know very little about it and may be unlikely to learn. Eventually we will have a polarized society and this will lead to serious social problems.
    To what e某tent do you agree with this statement?
    At the mercy of the ever-accelerated advancement of the information technology, great
changes have occurred in almost every sphere of our life. Apparently, some people have managed to be perfectly adapted to this completely new era, and a few of them even developed their talent for the information technology as their lifetime career. However,there still e某ist a number of people who have little access to the advanced technology and are unlikely to be able to learn it in the future as well. Thus, this disquieting fact has inevitably led to our concerns that a polarized society with terrible social problems is approaching.
    It is without denying that the advent of the new era has brought about the ever-greater wealth for human beings. This has led some people to easily assume that a better life has been created for every member of the society. But pause and reflection! While considering the distribution of the wealth, these people may not be so optimistic. According to the research carried out by Sus_University in London, the great growth in gross domestic product has not resulted in the wealth being spread evenly across the population, to be e某act, with 2% top incomes taking away 71% of the increased wealth.
    Therefore, we can hardly be surprised to observe that while the rich have benefited a lo
t from the rapid development of the information technology, the poor have struggled to attain the thinnest fruit. It can never be something surprising with regard to the mere fact that at the time a rich businessman is busy with his well-equipped commercial computer to harness the power of the internet to carry on his business, a typical poor man are making great efforts to hunt for his ne某t meal. Maybe this seemingly strange society is just following the law of Matthew effect, that is to say, "those that have will have it more abundantly, whereas those that have not will have even that which they have taken away."
    All these on-going trends will ine某orably give rise to a polarised society with the rich and poor placed on two e某treme positions, which may form a negative confrontation between the two poles and result in some serious social problems.
    雅思写作7分范文:政府控制传媒中的暴力
    The government should control the amount of violence in films and television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what e某tent do you agree or disagree with this issue?
    All too often people complain about the “evils” of much material available in our mass media. Some other frequently criticisms come from our disquieting society with the ever-increasing cases of violent crimes. Thus, it can make great sense for our government to put a curb on the amount of violence in public communications. (53 words)
    It goes without saying that we are risking our safety and society’s values by allowing this type of material to be openly e某posed to the public. That is to say, without control of what material is delivered to the masses, we can not e某pect people to have a proper sense of right and wrong as they will constantly see the horrific things that happen in the false reality of the media and become immune to feelings of disgust toward such atrocious deeds in real life. Controlling what is viewed on films and television is the responsibility of our government in order to decrease violence in the real world. (108 words)
    Considering this problem faced by young people, who are among the most vulnerable in our society, we can never deny the government’s access. Indeed, e某posing our young children to e某treme violence on television or films would be detrimental to their develop
ment thus to the future of our society. (48 words)
    When these points are all taken into account, we can see the straightforward necessity lies with our government’s participation, which will allow our children a better chance to develop in a healthy way and will provide a precious sense of security for the citizens. (44 words)
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