The Differences between College Study and High School Study
When I ’m a high school student, I’m longing for the college life very much. From my point of view, the college study is free and easy . Now I have been staying in the university for one and a half year which shows that my previous thought isn’t true. It is very different between college study and high school study .
At high school, the students’ subjects are same. But at college, the students can have subjects they like. In high school, your teacher often spent time going over the assigned reading and the assigned problems in class or going over important points again and again. In college, learning does not take place primarily in the classroom, and you, not your professors, are responsible for what you learn. In high school, the teacher planned most of this time for you. In college it is you who must be responsible for this time. Managing this shift in responsibility is one of the most important things you can do to increase your likelihood of success.
Knowing the differences in the way learning is structured at college can help you be succes
sful. The key is to understand how important your time is and to use it well. Here are some tips for using your learning time effectively:
Plan a balanced schedule of activities including school, work, sleep and fun.
Take good class notes and study your notes as soon after class as possible. If this is not possible reserve some time the days of your classes to review the material.
Remember academics are your primary responsibility.
College is different than high school, but you can be successful and still have fun. Get yourself a good planner, do your scheduling, and have a great year!
When I 'm a high school student, I'm longing for the college life very much.
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∙[推荐词汇] very在写作中使用的太多，可考虑换为extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。 
Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate.
如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.
一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
The surface of Mars is remarkably diverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
He was so informed and intensely forceful.
他是那么见多识广，极了不起。
∙[语法检查] a high (Wrong article)
∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。 
college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。
university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。
institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。
school: 指大学所属的学院或系。
academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。
From my point of view, the college study is free and easy .
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Now I have been staying in the university for one and a half year which shows that my previous thought isn't true.
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∙[点评] 建议将one and a half year改为one and a half years,这是习惯用法。
∙[语法检查] a half (Wrong article)
∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: previousschedule用法及搭配, foregoing, preceding, prior, former 均可表示“在前的”之意。 
previous: 指时间上、顺序上较早的，或指正在谈论的某事的前一个。
foregoing: 指前所述的，是following的反义词。
preceding: 特指时间和地位上紧接在前。
prior: 与previous同义，常可换用，但prior有时强调更大的重要性，对比意味强。
former: 系latter的反义词，比prior更着重对比。
∙[错误搭配] half year冠词缺失，建议改为half a year
It is very different between college study and high school study .
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。 
different: 普通用词，强调事物间的区别或本质的不同。有时侧重对比，不着重差别。
various: 通常强调种类的数目。
diverse: 语气较强，指性质完全不同，着重显著的区别。
At high school, the students' subjects are same.
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∙[推荐词汇] same 在写作中使用的太泛，可考虑换为identical 等。
∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: issue, subject, theme, topic 均有“主题，话题”之意。 
issue: 指有争论、议论，急需讨论研究的热点话题。
subject: 一般用词，使用广泛。指书籍、文章、演讲、讨论等中所隐含的、暗示的，需要由读者或听众推断的主题或中心话题。
theme: 系正式用词，多指文学、艺术作品的主题，或论文、演说的主题。
topic: 普通用词，含义广泛，但其范畴小于subject。既可指文章、讲话的题目，谈话的内容，又可指提纲中的标题甚至段落的主题或中心思想。
But at college, the students can have subjects they like.
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∙[搭配统计] 动名搭配 subject 在教材中出现过 105 次 
SeeAlso: have field577,have discipline402,take subject261,have study253
In high school, your teacher often spent time going over the assigned reading and the assigned problems in class or going over important points again and again.
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∙[高分词汇] important可以考虑替换为 高分词汇 crucial 或 essential 
crucial: extremely important/critical:
It is crucial that the report should be on time
essential: (something) very important/indispensable:
It is essential that you should take out a proper insurance.
It is essential for the applicant to wear a dark suit.
∙[中式英语] problem 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
∙[搭配统计] 动名搭配 ime 在教材中出现过 22214 次 

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