英语鼓励性评语
英文作文批改激励性评语
英语作文激励性评语
一、宏观性评价
1. 整体印象类评语
Super!Excellent!Perfect!Wonderful！Fantastic！Marvelous！
采用整体印象类评语对于起始阶段的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一律德使用此类评语，就会使学生无法正确认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师的评语失去应有的作用。
2. 规范导知类评语
Beautiful.Clear. Wonderful.Good hand-writing.
You'er careful of using pronounciation.
Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.
I'm expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time.
YOu'd better pay more attention to word order.
Better be more careful of your spelling.
It's important to compose a draft beforhand.
3. 情感调控类评语
I appreciate your handwriting.
You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.
You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.
You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and idioms.motivate用法和短语
I'm expecting greater progress from you in writing. Come on. If you need my help, never hesitate to come to me.
警句：
Hard work leads to success.
Not to advance is to go back.
No one is without faults.
Keeping is harder than winning. Keep it up.
二、微观写作技能方面的评语
1. 专项点拨类评语
It's proper to use the proverb in Para.2 Quite clever.
You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.
The struck sentence is perfectly used.
You'd better use third person in the first para.
It's good to use the past tense in your writing.
2. 佳句欣赏类评语
教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号（如E--Excellent)或标识不同星级等。
What a wonderful sentence using cover.
It's really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.
The inverted sentence is well written.
3. 谋篇布局类评语
A good beginning.    A perfect ending. Well-organized.Perfectly-expanded.
The first para. makes a good beginning.
The last para. makes a perfect ending.
All the points have been covered.
It's clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para.
It's wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences. You are good at developing a para.
You have made great progress in developing a passage.
I am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.
Better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences.
It's really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.
在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领，重在对学生进行词句方面的引导；对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。
虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合，因为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂。但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细。有很大启发！
篇二：英语作业评语集锦
英语作业评语集锦? 英语作业评语不仅仅是对作业本身进行评价，也可以包括学习和生活的各个方面，它的语言形式更是丰富多彩，千变万化，既可以是一个词或一个短语，也可以是一句话、一个段落或一
则格言。例如：  A  一个词：●Great! / Nice! / Perfect! / Good! / Very good! / Wonderful! / Correct! / Excellent! / Careless! / Unclear! / Untidy! B.短语：●Well done! / Neat and tidy! / Very nice! /Quite correct! /Quite OK (Okay)! /Well-written! /Just so- so. /Far from correct. /So careless! C. . 语气：●Your English is excellent. ●I wish you would work harder. ●How I wish you would be more careful. ●Pay attention to your spelling.
D. 格言：●Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧●Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成●A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。●  A man becomes learned by asking questions. 不耻下问才能有学问。●A man cannot spin and reel at the same time. 一心不能二用。●Care and diligence bring luck. 谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。●Complacency is the enemy of study. 学习的敌人是自己的满足。●Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. 自信是走向成功的第一步。●Industry is the parent of success. 勤奋是成功之母。
●.Never deter till tomorrow that which you can do today.今日事须今日毕，切勿拖延到明天。.●.Diligence is the mother of good fortune. 勤勉是好运之母。●Failure is the mother of success. 失
败是成功之母  E. 句型：●That's OK! / That’s all right! / That's wrong.What a good job you have done! /What a good boy you are! / ●How carefully you've worked! /How nice your
work is! ●Now you can do better than before. ●Your handwriting is excellent! ●Your English will become better if you work harder. ●It is clever of you to do so. /It's nice of you to say so./It's careless of you to write this way. ●You've done so nicely. /You've made such a careless mistake! ●Try to do better next time! /See what you've done! / Correct your mistakes. /Don't do that again! ●I find you've made a lot of progress! I think you can work more carefully next time. I' m sorry you've made so many mistakes in your work. ●Your handwriting is not so nice as Maggie's. You've done better than last time. You can do best of all if you try harder. F . 段落：●Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever Success belongs to the diligent learners. I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practicing your spoken English. G. “What a beautiful handwriting! If only be more careful!”（多漂亮的书法呀！要是作业再仔细一点就好了！）“Well done! But would you please improve your handwriting?”（做得很好！再设法改善一下你的书法怎么样？）“I'm so

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