读后续写课程No.03
Part2：续写微技能——描写分类
四、动作描写之“走”
慢慢的走
散步，闲逛
stroll
They strolled along the riverbank, admiring the setting sun.
他们沿着河堤散步，欣赏落日。
拖着脚走
shuffle
He shuffled across the room to the window.
他慢吞吞地走到房间那头的窗前。
蹒跚而行
shamble
An old tramp shambled along, looking for cigarette ends on the floor.
一位流浪老人蹒跚着向前走，在地上烟头。
摇摇晃晃地走
stagger
The man was staggering under the weight of a huge parcel.
那人背着一个大包摇摇晃晃地走着。
悄悄地走
溜
sneak
Tom sneaked into the bedroom and slid into bed.
汤姆悄悄地溜进卧室并钻进被子。
偷偷接近
stalk
The lion was stalking a zebra.
狮子正在偷偷接近一只斑马。
挤
挤过去
force a passage through
He forced a passage through the crowd.
他从人中挤过去。
挤到
elbow one’s way to
He elbowed his way to the center of the group of onlookers.
他挤到看热闹的人中央。
跑，快步走
快走，小跑
trot
He put on the shoes at once, trotted towards the little girl's house and knocked at the door again.
他立刻穿上鞋子，快步走向小女孩的家，又敲响了房门。
冲刺，快跑
sprint
She jumped out of the car and sprinted for the front door.
她跳下车，朝前门跑去。
快速地走
踱步
pace
He started pacing the floor, his head bent, deep in thought.
他开始在屋里踱来踱去，低着头，沉思着。
Pack back and forth来回踱步
大步走（angry，determined，confident）
stride
Brian strode out of the room without speaking.
布莱恩一言不发地大步走出房间。
Part3：高级语法现象
（四）特殊句式之倒装句
Section1: 类别
第一类：描写人与物空间位置变化的全部倒装句
表运动方向的副词away, off, down, up, in ... / 地点副词短语 + go/flee/run/等表运动的谓语动词 + 名词
Hearing the dog barking fiercely, away fled the thief.
听到狗狂吠，小偷逃走了。
第二类：描写静态场景/一些写景画面的全部倒装句
表地点的副词/介词（短语） + be/lie/等静态动词 + 主语
In front of her was another long passage and she just managed to catch sight of the rabbit hurrying down it.
在她的面前是另一条长长的通道，她正好看到兔子匆匆向远方跑去。
第三类：部分倒装强调情感——用于强调情感的可用so+情感形容词+be+主语+that……
So scared was I that I could hardly move an inch.
我吓得寸步难行。
第四类1：部分倒装强调时间——not until+从句/时间状语+助动词/settingsun情态动词/系动词+主语+谓语 （主倒从不倒）
Not until then did a smile lit up George’s face.
直到那时乔治脸上才露出喜。
第四类2：部分倒装强调时间——Hardly/Scarcely had + 主语 + 过去分词 + when + 从句
Scarcely had the fast-food restaurant’s closing time come when I trotted towards home.
快餐店一到关门时间，我就快步走回家。
Section2: 用倒装句升级以下各句
（1）During the exam, I was so nervous that my mind went blank.
During the exam, so nervous was I that my mind went blank.
（2）A voice he had never heard before came out of the darkness.
Out of the darkness came a voice he had never heard before.
（3）Tom rushed off without so much as a “goodbye”.
Off rushed Tom without so much as a “goodbye”.
（4）A small stream lined by trees runs at the foot of the mountain.
At the foot of the mountain runs a small stream lined by trees.
（5）An expression of horror stood on his face.
On his face stood an expression of horror.
Section3:造句子
接着传来了Walker小的声音。
Then came Miss Walker’s voice.
令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。
Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds.
我永远不会忘记第一次见到你的场景。
Never will I forget meeting you for the first time.
在任何情况下你都不应该气馁。
In no case/On no account/Under no circumstance should be discouraged.
只有当我离开父母去意大利之后，我才意识到我是多么爱他们。
Only when I left my parents for Italy did I realize how much I loved them.
（四）特殊句式之虚拟语气
Section1: 类别
第一类：主语 + wish sb. did/had done/could do真希望……
对现在事实的假设用did或were；
对过去事实的假设用had done；
对将来事实的假设用would/could/might do
“I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”
“我真希望我们能帮助他赚钱，”克莱拉说。“他的家人遭受着巨大的痛苦。”
第二类：Without/But for + 名词，sb. would do/would have done 没有……的话，某人就……
对现实事实的假设用would do；
对过去事实的假设用would have done
（1）Without setbacks, our life would not be filled with wonderful stories.
如果没有挫折，我们的人生就不会充满精彩的故事。
（2）But for this experience, I wouldn’t have realized I should spend more time with my family.
要不是这次经历，我不会意识到我应该花更多的时间和家人在一起。
第三类：If only sb. did/had done要是……就好了
If only + 主语 + did/were 现在的愿望；
If only + 主语 + had done过去的愿望；
If only + 主语 + could do将来的愿望
If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.
要是她没有把手机忘在汤姆的包里就好了。
Section2: 补全句子
（1）“If only I _____________(listen) to my mother’s advice!” the little girl whispered to her
self. had listened
（2）But for your instruction, I would not _____________(make) such great progress. have made
（3）Steven lowered his head with embarrassment, wishing he _____________(be) more careful. had been
（4）He couldn’t imagine what would _____________(happen) if Henry hadn’t come to his rescue. have happened
（5）If more of us _____________(value) family above money, it would be a better world. valued
Section3: 造句子
（1）我要是没和汤姆吵架就好了！我现在就不会被困在这个可怕的地方了。
If only I hadn’t quarreled with Tom! I wouldn’t be trapped in this terrible place now.

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