书面表达  写做法建议类
命题探索
    广西各地地市近六年对“做法建议类”的考查频次逐年增多(共18
次),可见它已成为广西各地市的一个命题趋势。其中:2016年5次、2015
年3次、2014年4次、2013年2次、2012年2次、2011年2次。
    主要分为四个方面
    安全/健康方面(7次)、人物行为方面(6次)、环保/节约方面(3次)、学习方面(2次)
亮点句型积累
开头句:引出话题/问题
1. Nowadays, ... has become a serious problem.
2. Recently, the problem of ... has aroused peoples concern.
3. A lot of people seem to
4. Its said/believed that ...
5. Its quite clear/obvious that ...
6. A recent survey suggestions that ...
(过渡句:起承上启下的作用)
7. Here is some advice on how to ...
8. There are some suggestions for ...
9. How can we ...? Here are some suggestions.
10. Id like to give you some suggestions on how to ...
11. Im glad to share my ideas about how to ...
中间句:给出建议(注意:要紧然有序)
注意:提建议时可采用不同的情态动词来表达; 句与句之间采用不同的连接词 / 组,层层递进,如:whats more, in addition, besides, furthermore等。
格式一:
    Firstly / Firstly, we should / ought to 方法一. Second / Secondly, wed better 方法二. Third / Thirdly, 方法三. Finally / At last / In the end, 方法四.
格式二:
    On one hand, 方法一. On the other hand, 方法二.
As for me, I suggest / advise 方法三. Only in this way we can________.
结尾句:强调主题,发出号召
1. All in all / (总之), its important /
/ we must try our best to ...
2. If you follow the above advice / suggestions, you will ...
    方法突破:针对咨询建议类书面表达,考生可以以下三方面入手:1. 首先,根据汉语或英语提示,说明存在的现象或问题,并引出下文将要提出的几条建议(Now Ill give you some )。2. 其次,针对存在的问题或现象,提出2-4条合理的建议(如:Firstly, ... Secondly,... Thirdly, ...)每条建议要用1-3句补充,说明该建议的理由或好处。3. 最后,用1-2句进行总结,要具有全面性。如Only in this way we ...; From the above / In a word ...,; All those come to one point ...等。
参考例文
某中学生英文报正在开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。假设你叫魏华,请从以下几个方面,用英语写出你在如何减轻学习压力方面的具体做法,向该栏目投稿。70词左右。
1.交朋友,常与他人交流;
2.多参与体育锻炼;
3.空闲时间听音乐、看电影等等;
4.假期旅行;
5.其他减压方式。
参考词汇:feel stressed (感觉有压力的)communicate with(与……交流) take exercise (做体育锻炼)
in one’s spare time(在……空闲时间) go on a trip(去旅行)
Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. As for me, when I feel stressed, I usually communicate with my friends, parents or teachers. Sometimes I will do sports with our classmates, such as riding bikes, going swimming and so on. I go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time, too. Whats more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe, if we are more relaxed, well live more happily, be healthier and learn better.
                                                                         
                                    Wei Hua
评分标准:
第一档(14~15分):所写内容包括表格内所提供的所有信息,虽有少许错误,但语句通顺,表达流畅,卷面整洁,词数达到要求。
第二档(11~13分):能写出大部分内容要点,有部分语法错误,但语句基本通顺,表达基本清楚,词数基本达到要求。
第三档(6~10分):能写出部分内容要点,表达虽不连贯,但能看出基本意思。
第四档(1~5editor suggestion分):能写出少量与主题相关的单词或短语,看不出完整句子。
写作练兵
你校将于近期举办一场主题为“怎样成为一名受欢迎的学生”的演讲比赛,假如你是王华,请根据下面的要点和要求,以“How to be a popular student?”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语演讲稿。文章的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
要点:1. 衣着整洁(keep our clothes clean and tidy),常常微笑(keep 
        smiling);   
  2. 诚实善良(be honest and kind),乐于助人(try our best to help ...);
      3. 懂得与他人分享(know how to share ...);       
      4. 其它。 
要求:1. 内容完整,语言流畅,不要逐句翻译,自由地适当发挥。
      2. 短文中不能出现真实姓名,校名何其它真实信息。
How to be a popular student?
  Hello, everyone! I am Wang Hua. Today I come to take part in the speech because I want to be a popular student. But now how can we be popular students? I think we should do the following things at least.
  Firstly, we should                       . We should also keep a good mood and _______________. Secondly, as popular students, we should ____________________. We should _______________________ those people who meet trouble. Thirdly, __________________________ our love, happiness, sadness and other things with others is very important, too. I can make us know about each other well.
  To be a popular student, I will try my best to do all things well. Please support me!
  Thats all. Thank you for your listening.

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