遣词造句 布局谋篇（下）
                                                                                                             
                         
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06.12
On Spring Festival Evening on CCTV
1.对于一些人来说， 春节联欢晚会是除夕夜（New Year Eve）的基础。 (milk)
To some people, Spring festival evening on CCTV milks their New Year Eve.
2. 这些人会狼吞虎咽的吃完年夜饭就等着看晚会。（wolf down，New Year's Eve dinner ）
These people usually wolf down their New Year's Eve dinner and expect for the show after.
06.12
On Spring Festival Evening on CCTV
3. 春节联欢晚会引起了争论。（throw an apple of discord）
。。。throws an apple of discord.
4.致命缺点是节目的千篇一律。没有创意。（follow the same pattern and has no fresh air）
The Achilles' heel, according to the survey, is that the evening always follows the same pattern and has no fresh air.
布局谋篇之作秀
作文＝作秀（领着阅卷老师看风景）
秀字迹
秀句式
秀词汇
秀开头
秀中间
秀结尾
秀角度
tabletennis造句秀开头
(1) 主题句法
  The birth of recreational activities to the growth of youth can be either a blessing or a curse.
  (2) 问题法
    Do you feel hesitated to say No to your friends’request?
Is a test of spoken English necessary?
    (3) 对比法
  Recently , 。。。throws an apple of discord. Those who object to A announce that _____ . But those who favor A claim that_____.
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(4) 故事法(较少使用)
My name is Liming. I am studying at a college. A week ago I saw a traffic accident , which is still vivid in my mind.
(5) 引语法 （补充的办法）
As the proverb goes, “practice makes perfect.”(适用于记住的名言)
（6）There be 句型开头
There is an increasing awareness among people that…..
There is no denying the fact that…
格调开头回放
With the birth of …, sth. is becoming more and more … in our life. 2) Hit with this trend, many people come to believe that ...(错误观念) 3) But their viewpoint could not arouse any echo in my mind.(作者的立场)
Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?
秀中间    按两个标准检查
之一：用词多样丰富
Confidence - faith - build up faith - feel capable of doing sth.
lack of confidence - lose heart - feel frustrated
Appearance –birth，mushroom
Good--favorable
资料参考同义词表
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之二：长短句交错使用
When it comes to…, I hold the view that…
I am for/ against the view that…
There is no denying the fact that…
No wonder …
The reason why…is that…
Only in this way can we…
Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that…
秀结尾
画龙点睛式 
升华主题式
余味无穷式
画龙点睛
重复中心思想 回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到再次肯定和强调的效果。
With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games have now become more popular with people than ever.
概括结论 文章最后用几句话概括全文内容，并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的观点。
In conclusion/to sum up, （ To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that… ）a good teacher-student relationship can be mutual beneficial. The students gain knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.
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升华主题
应用引语 用格言、谚语或习语总结全文!!!，既言简意赅又有更强的说服力。
If you have anything to do, try to do it yourself, for that is the safest way to permanent success. Remember the famous saying “God helps those who help themselves.”（常用谚语集合）
提出展望或期望 表示对将来的展望或期待读者投入行动。
I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the next century. As China will open further to the outside world， the language is sure to be spread world widely.
当你记不住谚语的确切原文时：
Just like one proverb indicates,
One  proverb implies that…
“Don’t put your eggs in one basket.”
Just like one proverb indicates, we should not put all eggs in a basket.
One  proverb implies that it’s not a good idea to put all eggs in one basket.
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余味无穷：
用反问结尾 虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，具有明显的强调作用，引起读者思考。
Therefore, listening skills must be consciously improved. Since it is such an important means of learning and communication, why shouldn’t we develop this ability as far as possible?
Who, being loved, is poor?
秀角度
正说 it’s good, it’s bad
反说 it can’t be bad; it can’t be good
邪说 it all depends. .. The situation vary from …to…(person to person)
出其不意  大多数人会写什么？我能不能从反面来写
头脑风暴公式
布局谋篇之发散思维公式
Compare头脑风暴
I  &  Others
Now  &  Past
Ideal  &  Fact
为什么质疑
为什么赞成
正想反想 “如果不这样~”
       
头脑风暴之学校活动重要性
Broaden our mind/ Widen your horizon.
Enrich our life
Put what we learned into practice
Give full play to one's intelligence
Gain other knowledge and information.
Getting relaxed totally.
A window to see part of the society
Skill of communication
Develop your potential
Quality-education requires no bookworm.
it can help us to keep fit
07年6月真题
1、本社团的主要活动内容. 2、参加本社团的好处. 3、如何加入本社团 ...
An announcement to welcome students to join to a club
2007年12月
1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课
2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课
3、以你自己为例……
08年6月
Recreational activities

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