⼩学⽣英语作⽂欣赏多篇（begoingto）
六年级英语上册第三单元作⽂
A busy weekend
I’m going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I am going to do my homework. On Saturday afternoon, I am going to play football. On Sunday morning, I am going to buy a book. On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents.
My Weekend Plan
I’m going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday, I’m going to visit my grandparents with father and mother.I will help them to clean their room. We are going to have lunch together.On Sunday, I am going to do homework in the morning. In the afternoon,I’m going to play football with friends.
My weekend plan
Hi, I am Amy.I am going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I am going to do my homework.In the afternoon, I am going to play football with my friends. In the evening, I am going to watc
h TV with my parents.On Sunday morning, I am going to take a dancing class.In the afternoon, I am going to watch a film. In the evening,I am
going to read books.I love my weekend.
A Bad Cold
I’m not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold!
I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及的全过程。写出了⼩作者希望快点康复，好去上学的愿望。
时态：这篇⽂章可以采⽤⼀般现在时来写。如果主语是第三⼈称单数，动词别忘加s。
句型：要⽤feel 加形容词，和表⽰“患某种疾病“的⽤法have+表⽰的疾病的单词。注意：在表⽰疾病时，可以使⽤-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只⽤⼀个单词，以避免枯燥。要写出得病后的简单及⼼情，不能只写得病的情况。常见病句：My nose is hurt。因为be后⾯要加形容词，⽽hurt是动词，因此应使⽤sore；东西放在床上要⽤on the bed。⽣病，是卧床不起，应该说stay in bed。
表⽰吃药时，通过⽤take some medicine，不⽤eat。
词汇量要控制在40~60之间。
A Farewell Party
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class There have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作记叙了⼀个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上⼤家都表演了什么节⽬，以及晚会后⼤家要去看望刘芸的故事。
时态：这篇习作可采⽤三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是⼀般将来时和现在进⾏时，所以这⾥我们才⽤⼀般现在时，现在进⾏时和⼀般将来时来写。句型：⼀般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他。
现在进⾏时：主语+现在分词+其他。
⼀般将来时：主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他。
注意：由于本篇⽂章中所涉及的时态⽐较多，所以要注意⼀下时态的变化。学⽣们都在表演什么节⽬可以⽤现在进⾏时，将要去做什么，要⽤将来时。另外还要
注意，⼀般现在时在肯定句中，主语是第三⼈称单数，谓语动词也要⽤第三⼈称单数。
A Field Trip
It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited.
Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves.
They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画⾯来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。
时态：这篇⽂章可以⽤⼀般过去时和现在进⾏时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进⾏时，所以，这⾥我们采⽤现在进⾏时⽐较合适。
句型：××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.
inspring是什么意思注意：活动的相关表述法采⽤新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时⽤⼀般现在时。
看图写作⽂。
题⽬：A Happy Day in Spring
提⽰：下图是Mr. Black ⼀家⼈在春天的某⼀天在野外游玩的场景。请⽤⼀般现在时描写图中所呈现出的内容。可作适当的想象和发挥。
要求：B条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，句⼦通顺，标点正确，书写⼯整、规范。
不少于70个单词。
A Happy Day in Spring
It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family has a picnic in a park. They bring much food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.
Birthday
My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.
At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards,
picture books, pens.
They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out. we sing and dance.
We have a good time at the party.
Happy day
Today I'm very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park.
It's a sunny day ,the bird is singing,I'm singing too.When I get to park,I see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.what a happy day!
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven
o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.
【要领点评】
这篇作⽂的题⽬是“我的⼀周”，⼩作者没有说⼀些空话，⽽是从⾃⼰的亲⾝经历写起，叙述了⾃⼰⼀周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得⾃然、流畅。
⼩朋友们写作⽂时要注意⼈称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提⽰，结合⾃⼰的实际，写⾃⼰⾝边熟悉的事情。
Tom’s Holiday
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期⾥的活动，记叙了假期⾥去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。
时态：这篇⽂章可采⽤两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是⼀般过去时的⽤法，所以这⾥⼤部分我们采⽤⼀般过去时⽐较合适。
句型：主语+动词过去式+其他……
主语+will+动词原形+其他……
注意：活动的相关表达法可采⽤旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例：eat 的过去式为ate，为不规则变化。
My Birthday Party
Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year.
In my party, we can do many things:
1. Light the candles.
2. Sing a “Happy Birthday”song.
3. Make a wish.
4. Blow out the candles.
5. Cut off the cake.
6. Eat the cake.
7. Open the presents.
8. Sing and dance.
9. Watch videos or play other games.
10. Say goodbye with each other.
That’s my birthday party, is it interesting?
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了⽣⽇晚会的各项具体活动，⽐较全⾯。⽐较以前⼏个单元的写作写法，这个短⽂按活动顺序⽐较合适。
时态：这篇短⽂可以⽤三种时态来写：
1、⼀般将来时：主要说明⽣⽇晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进⾏。
2、⼀般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个⽣⽇。
3、⼀般过去时：主要说明你的⽣⽇晚会是如何进⾏的。
句型：invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某⼈做某事
注意：由于这篇短⽂很有局限性，所表达的⼤体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合⾃⼰的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意⼀些短语和单词的书写不要发⽣错误：
eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”⽽不能写成“blow candles”。
寒假很快就要到了，请你为你的寒假写⼀个计划。快点把你的计划写出来吧!
My Winter Holiday
It’s January. My winter holiday is coming. I am going to go to Thailand. I will go there by plane. I like the food in Thailand. It’s spicy and tasty. In the
winter holiday, I am going to play basketball. I am going to paint pictures, too. I will help my mother do some housework. I will be very happy in my winter holiday.
我的假期
I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship.
I will take a big blue spaceship.
Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.
At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.
This is a good holiday on the sun.
I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had
a lot of fum.
根据给出的材料，写⼀写Mike这个周末的活动计划。
Saturday Sunday
Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening.
My winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming. I am so excited.
In this winter holiday, I am going to take a trip with my parents by plane.We are going to Beijing. Then, I am going to go ice skating there. I am going to see the snow. I will play with the snow. I am going to make a snowman with my sister. Then we are going to visit the Great wall. At last, we are going to go back home by plane.
That will be fun in the winter holiday! I can’t wait!
Zoom’s Weekend
Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his
grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。
时态：这篇⽂章可以⽤三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是⼀般过去时态，所以我们采⽤⼀般过去时态⽐较合适。
句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。
注意：活动的相关表达法采⽤新旧知识结合的⽅法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。
Let’s have a nice day
It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.
【要领点评】
怎样才称得上是“美好的⼀天”？有两点不能忘记，⼀是安排得充实，⼆是安排得有意义。这两点⼩作者⽆疑都想到了，上午去书店看书买书，中午在饭店吃
饭，下午去颐和园玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！⽂章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，⽂笔也很优美。
⼩朋友们在写这种叙事的⽂章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、⼈物和活动等，使⽂章有⾎有⾁。要看好是写过去发⽣的事情，还是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的事情，以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情，那么就要注意在表述时多⽤“be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有⼀点也很重要，那就是故事的线索要交代好，让读者在阅读时对整个过程⼀⽬了然。
My weekend
There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周⽇的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课→下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周⽇上午：看望祖⽗母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与⽗母交
流→感受：⾼兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周⽇中的⼏个⽐较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地⽅由什么⼈做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发⼀下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。
时态：这篇短⽂我们可以⽤三种时态来写: a.⼀般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.⼀般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.⼀般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这⾥我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采⽤⼀般现在时来写。
注意：活动的相关表达⽅法可采⽤旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，和新知识，eg. Climb mountains去爬⼭中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成“I often with my parents watch TV .”词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。
Visiting the Museum
It was fine for traveling last Sunday . I showed Ann round the museum . she was surprised to see many old things , and she was interested in the King’s hat . She wanted to buy one. I told her it wasn ’t real . Ann kept asking me some other things. When she saw a thing with three legs and a strange top , she stopped to point at in and asked me , “What is that ? ”“It is a cup . ”I told her .
Last Weekend

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