乱用成语的作文
【篇一:我的作文经验与教训】
我的作文经验与教训
以前,我很怕写作文,不知道该怎么写,写些什么,总是七拼八凑,每次都写得乱七八糟,东扯一句,西拉一点,一会儿写这,一会儿写那。爸爸、妈妈见我每次写作文都愁眉苦脸,便开导我:写作文要写实际的东西,不能乱想,脑袋里必须先构思好。虽然爸爸、妈妈这样说了好几次,我也试过几次,但总是构思不出来。后来我从语文老师那儿得到了一个写作文的秘诀,就是多积累好词好句。从此以后,我读了许许多多的作文书,可进步还是不太大。于是我又去向老师请教。老师语重心长地对我说:写作文其实很简单,只要掌握三点,就能写出好作文。第一:要多积累好词好句;第二:要把好词好句用在适当的地方,不能乱用;第三:要多写作文。俗话说得好:‘熟能生巧’。这就是写作文的所有秘诀。我听了高兴极了,照着老师说的话做了一个学期,果然有了很大的进步。现在我可喜欢写作文了!。爸爸、妈妈也夸我说:以前你写作文时总是咬着笔头,想了半天也写不出来,每次作文都只能写大半张纸,现在可以写三张了吧。听了之后我心里总是甜滋滋的。我通过不断的练习,发
现写作文还要多观察。其实很多的题材就是从生活中挖掘出来的。
我现在的作文就象一颗种子在土里发芽、长大了,不仅不怕写作文,还有几手拿手好戏。比如说,我比较擅长用一些比喻句和一些成语。现在我对写作文的要求越来越高,从以前的一张纸到现在的四张纸。
【篇二:作文替换词】
六级作文中常用词替换:
1 (an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of)替换many.
2. quiet a few , several替换some
3. harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think  (因为是书面语,所以要加that) 3.affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
4.for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
5.increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
eg. sth has gained growing popularity. popular with the advancement of sth. 6.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
7.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very 8.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
9.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
10.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.
11.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
12.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
13.there are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth 14.desire 替换want.
15.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 16.bear in mind that 替换remember
17.enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
18. interaction替换communication
19. frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
20.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
1. improve 提高:
promote: 促进ac之间的贸易promote the trade between a and c; he was promoted to senior manager in this company.
advance: our understanding of human genetics has considerably(非常的,可换做vastly) advanced.
enhance: the publicity has enhanced his reputation.这次宣传提高了他的名望
2.change 改变:
transform:多指改头换面,完全改变,不能用于形容slight change。说到人口变化:the increasing population has transformed the landscape and structure of local industry structure.人口剧增改变了小镇的景以及当地的工业结构
3.emphasize 强调:
highlight:the report highlight the decline in the numbers of native(可以换作local) plants and insects.
stress: he stresses the need for parents to listen to their children.
(highlight and emphasize 的区别:highlight是告诉人们重点,因而能够让别人注意,类似于老师勾重点;而emphasize则是使重点清晰,不管别人是否能注意得到。而stress则和emphasize差不多)
transform和convert的区别 4.develop培养:
cultivate: cultivate the ability of … ;培养情操;cultivate a more relaxed and positive way towards life.
nurture: 养育,同样可以指培养人才(talents)the sea nutures ample marine animals.
5.break 破坏:
impair:impair ability; 主要是破坏能力,莫乱用。
undermine这个词也是指的是抽象意义上的破坏,有逐渐削弱之意,重点是循序渐进的过程。undermine one’s ability/confidence/authority/position/credibility
jeopardize: 不能乱用,破坏的东西要上一定的等级才能配上此词。比如jeopardize the process of peace.破坏和平进程
devastate特指毁灭、蹂躏 the earthquake devastated the whole city.
6.keep 保存
preserve、conserve 保护资源用的就是这个词,不要用protect,protect这个词用在保护具体的东西。
7.deal with解决
tackle: tackle the problem.
resolve: resolve dispute争论/conflict冲突/problem/issue/crisis危机;来自拉丁语,比较正式。
8.need 需要
require:xxx requires courage and confidence.
necessitate
call for(这也是个很高级的用法):跟need一样的用法
从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about
增进enhance 代替improve  保护preserve 代替protect
污染contamination 代替pollution 需要(及
物动词)require, necessitate, call for 追求pursue, seek
责备,谴责blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable)
认为think, believe, hold, deem, maintain, argue, assert, declare, advocate, claim, be convinced that, insist,contend,
评估,评价assess, evaluate, measure, appraise, estimate 买buy, purchase
培养cultivate, foster, nurture, promote, enhance, boost, shape, form, develop,  鼓励,刺激encourage, embolden, hearten, inspire, stimulate, spur 坚持stick, adhere, cling 建立
build, erect, establish, set up.
build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, formal), establish  忽视,忽略neglect, ignore, overlook 保证,确保assure, ensure, guarantee, pledge 改变change, alter, modify, convert into, transform
引起,导致cause, trigger, give rise to, bring about, result in, lead to, contribute to 获得acquire, obtain, attain, gain 保护,保存conserve, preserve

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