英语六级写作范文及思路指导：科技的发展
There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What form do these problems take? Do problems of using mobile phones outweigh the benefits?
  本篇主要的考点包括：
  • 科技发展的影响是正面还是负面的?
  • 科技发展让我们的空闲时间变多还是变少?
  • 科技发展对我们的文化、思想、观念和社区有什么影响?
  科技发展的正负面影响都有，没有必然的结论。科技发展使人们的生活质量极大提高的同时，也可能导致人们养成不好的生活方式和习惯，对健康有不利的影响。考生在考试当中要注重论述的质量，至于倾向哪个方面未必一定重要。
  科技发展的正面影响有：
  • 生产效率更高，人们可以在更短时间内完成工作，因此可以有更多的体闲时间;
  • 给人们生活带来极大便利，提高了人们的生活水平;
  • 人们通过网络可以做很多事情，比如购物和处理个人财务，不用花太多时间在通勤(commute );
  • 人们联系更加方便，即便行动不方便的人也可以通过网络联系家人和扩大朋友圈;
  • 人们获得信息的渠道增多(譬如说网络、手机、电子图书馆、电视)，知识更加丰富。
  科技发展的负面影响有：
  • 因为竞争激烈，人们需要接受在职培训和教育，工作节奏加快，压力更大，和家人交流的机会更少;
  • 因为通讯发达，人们在下班之后也被同事和上司联系，在家里査阅工作上的；通讯的发达同时推动全球化，工作的性质也趋向于全球化，人们的工作吋间在某种程度上被延长了;
  • 人们享受着网络娱乐和其他媒体所提供的娱乐，因此忽视和家人的交流;
  • 人们喜欢上网，不愿意外出，性格变得孤僻，和外界的联系减少。
  手机所带来的问题和负面影响：
  • 社会问题：在公共场所讲话声音大(speak at an increased volume)，让人感觉不舒服(feel uncomfortable);
  • 技术问题：信息可能会被第三方截取(intercept)或者偷听(eavesdrop in);
  • 医疗问题：有可能增加患癌症的几率(increase the risk of suffering cancers);  • 安全问题：开车时打电话(talk on the phone while driving)，导致交通事故的发生(correlation with road traffic accidents)
  手机所带来的好处和正面影响：
  • 丰富生活：除了发信息(send text messages)和语音留言(make voice calls)之外，手机还可以用来浏览网页(Internet browsing)、听音乐(music playback)，管理个人信息(personal organisers)、收发(e-mail)、拍照(built-in cameras)、下载铃声(ringtones)、玩游戏 (games)和听广播(radio)等，由此丰富了人们的生活;
  • 方便沟通：手机使人们可以随时随地进行联系；在有突发事件的时候(in the event of an emergency)，手机可以通过信来确定人的位置(locate trapped or injured people using the signals from their mobile phones)。
  范文
  Across the world, especially the wealthier parts, the mobile phone has taken the place of telephone as an electronic telecommunication device, with the majority of the adult, teenager and even child owning one. As this technology has become rife, its drawbacks, which can be seen from social, medical and technical perspectives, deserve people's greatest attention.
  Similar to many other hi-tech products, such as computers, mobile phones have detrimental effects on users' health. For example, long-time heavy phone users seem to be more prone to certain types of cancers, although evidence to date is inconclusive. Another lethal health concern is the link between mobile phones and road accidents. It is argued that motorists have a much higher risk of collisions and losing control of the vehicle when driving and talking on the phone simultaneously, despite sometimes using bands-free systems.
  When the mobile phone has brought considerable convenience，people's obsession with convenience has meanwhile caused enormous disturbance. That's why the use of mobile phones has been prohibited in many public places, such as libraries, theatres, hospitals and even transports, such as trains, buses and aircrafts. Speaking at increased volume is considered impolite or even offensive, In schools, students are required to switch off cell phones before the class begins because mobile phones are responsible for a high amount of class disruptions.
  When its downside persists, the mobile phone has proven indispensable in modern life. It is handheld, lightweight, portable and multi-functioned, allowing users to send text messages, exchange music files, make voice calls, browse Internet, and so forth. Meanwhile, within twenty years, mobile phones are expected to be more pervasive as technical advances and mass manufacture will make them low-cost personal items. Given those factors, the mobile phone will continue to perform its role as a key social tool, by which one keeps in touch with others much more easily than did the generations before.
  As suggested above, the contribution of the mobile phone to the society is prominent and people's dependence on it for communication is an irreversible trend, although it has a number of problems that should be well handled.
  近义词表
  1. device=equipment=appliance=instrument：设备，设置
  2. rife=widespread=prevalent=ubiquitous=predominant=rampant：普遍的
3. prone to=susceptible to=vulnerable to：容易患上…的
4. lethal=fatal=deadly=life-damaging：致命的，有伤身体的
5. motorist=driver=car user. 使用汽车的人
6. collision=crash=accident：碰撞，车祸
  7. disturbance=annoyance=interruption：干扰，打扰8. disruption=interference=:distraction：干扰
  9. pervasive=prevalent=omnipresent：普遍的，流行的
  10. irreversible=permanent=irrevocable=unalterable：不可逆转的，永远的
英语六级写作范文及思路指导：快节奏的生活
　It is said that the fast pace of our everyday life, as a direct result of the rapid development of telecommunications technology and travel industry, has negative effects on individuals, nations and the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree?  解析：移动电话、因特网和现代交通工具使人们的生活节奏加快，其主要原因是人们交流更加方便，而且旅行也变得更加便利、频繁。值得注意的是，很多考生可能会去考虑电讯科技和交通行业的发展对人类产生的影响，而事实上，本题考查的是生活快节奏对人们产生的影响。
  负面影响：
  •快节奏的生活使人与人之间的相互交流减少(personal interaction reduces)，人们很难保持和改善与朋友亲人的关系(hard to maintain and improve relations with friends and family members)，这对社会和家庭都是有害的(detrimental to family life or social relations within or outside of work);
  • 快节奏的生活会引起疾病(lifestyle diseases , such as obesity, stroke, diabetes, heart diseases )
  正面影响：
  • 提高了效率和生产力，促进了信息交流和贸易往来(promote trade activity across the border);
  • 效率的提高使人们有更多的娱乐时间，生活更加丰富(leisure lives have been enriched) 。
  范文
  Not surprisingly, many aspects of people's daily lives have undergone considerable changes because of the recent development in technology. It is a particular concern that the pace of everyday life is becoming faster, resulting from the development in cars, air travel, telecommunications technology and the Internet 。 As well as benefits, this trend is to bring problems.
  On the positive side, the fast rhythm of life requires people to enhance efficiency when working and then allows them to enjoy longer leisure time. With the advance in telecommuncations people can make inquires by phone, instead of travelling long distances, Internet access makes it possible (for one to perform various tasks without leaving their offices. Even though people have to travel every now and then, for meeting business partners, visiting clients in other cities or other purposes, modem transport networks reduce the amount of time they spend on commutes.
  The acceleration of the pace of life also implies the expansion of people's social circle. In the past, social relationships were limited by physical factors such as geographical distance and low mobility, but nowadays, one can travel further and get acquainted with more people with those technological advances, such as the railroad, the automobile and the telephone. For instance, the rapid penetration of telecommunications technology has made the mobile phone a key social tool and people rely on their mobile phone address book to keep in touch with their friends.
  On the negative side, the fast-paced lifestyle is responsible for the upsurge in lifestyle-related problems. Jobs become demanding and require workers' full commitment, resulting in their depression and pressure. Underneath the facade of continued contraction of official working hours, employees are actually working longer, primarily because fax, e-mail or other communication devices have made the
m accessible to their supervisors, colleagues and customers after work. They have to respond instantly to voice and email messages from others. Private life has to be sacrificed.
  According to the facts outlined above, the doubts about the negative effects of the acceleration of pace of life are not well-grounded. People now enjoy greater well-being, which is reflected in more quality family time, less travel-related stress and close contact with friends and family members. However, they might have
to accept frequent intrusions as a by-product of convenient communication.
  近义词表
  1. penetration=invasion=permeating：渗透，入侵
  2. facade=disguise=cover-up ：伪装
  3. contraction=reduction：减少
  4. intrusion=interruption：侵扰，扰
  5. by-product=unwanted product=anything produced in the course of making another thing：副产品
英语六级写作范文及思路指导：追随时尚
Fashion is difficult to follow, and some people argue that we should not follow it. They think that we should dress what we like and feel comfortable. Do you agree or disagree?
  解析:
  支持追随潮流 (following fashion)的观点：
  • 时装是自我表达 ( a means of self-expression)的一种休现，表现人的性格和喜好(reflect one's personality or likes)，让人们在生活巾体验不同角(allow people to try on many roles in life)，同时便世界更加丰富多彩(diversity and variety of the world in which we live);
  • 新时代的时尚(fashion in the new era)并不一定意味着高消费，也并非一定穿某种款式的衣服才算时尚;
  • 时装源于生活(root in daily life)，反映生活趋势(reflect that life)，充分考虑了消费者的需求C consider consumer demand)，不像人们想的那样肤浅(not as superficial as some people think)
  反对追随潮流(following fashion )的观点：
  • 潮流变化太快，盲目追求潮流(follow fashion blindly)是浪费时间和金钱;
  • 失去了自己的喜好和判断(dwell too much on what others think);
  • 鼓励人们将衣服和地位、社会阶层还有财富联系在一起(associate clothing with status, social class and wealth)，这是一种歧视。
  范文
  Fashion refers to a style of clothing worn by most people of a country. The growing concern about fashion in recent years comes as no surprise, considering the fact that fashion is very often at odds with the traditional function of clothing,
protecting wearers from the extremes of weather. In my opinion, fashion is not a betrayal but an indicative of a principle that wearing clothing is for both functional and social reasons.
  Fashions are linked to personal style. Fashions allow wearers to express emotion and solidarity with other people. People dress to their mood and according to circumstances. Buying fashionable clothes is a process in which the buyer translates his or her self-esteem into a personal style. A fashion indicates one's taste, social class, likes and dislikes. It gives wearers a sense of identity and makes it p
ossible for them to feel connected to society.
  Fashions are designed and tailored to please buyers. Selecting, discussing and buying fashions can induce immense happiness. It has become a way of life and can be taken as a leisure activity, increasing interaction between people. With all types of images and colours, clothing is capable of giving buyers a desired look, boosting their moods and increasing their self-confidence. Fashion is about change which is necessary to keep life interesting.
  Despite the enjoyment brought by fashions, people should beware of their ever-changing nature and the expenditure of time and money on this commitment. A fashion usually remains popular for about one or two years at most and then is replaced by another. Many people have been obsessed with following the current fashions slavishly and pursuing the clothing with promised quality and limited availability ceaselessly. Many of them are motivated to buy outlandish clothing in a belief that they can thus keep up with fashion and their social positions are displayed.
  As shown above, there is no point in spurning fashion. Fashion is desired in a modern society as a means of expression and a source of enjoyment, although one should reduce unnecessary spending on Fashions.
accessible的近义词
  近义词表
  1. at odds with=in opposition to=contrary to=against: 和....反
  2. induce=stimulate=generate=bring：带来，促成
  3. beware of=be careful of=be cautious about=wary of：对…小心，谨慎
  4. at most=to the maximum：最多，最大
  5. slavishly=sequaciously；盲从地
  6. outlandish=bizarre=peculiar=eccentric；古怪的，奇异的
  7. spurn=reject=snub=rebuff=scum-disdain=despise=repulse: 反对；拒绝，蔑视

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