BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷113 (题后含答案及解析)
题型有：1. PART ONE 2. PART TWO
PART ONE
register for1． The software company you work for has decided to introduce identity cards for certain staff in your department.Write an email to all staff in your department:    saying which staff will need identity cards    explaining why the identity cards are needed    informing staff how to get a card. Write 40-50 words.
正确答案：Sample AHi,As you know this department has increased a lot, because of that, we are going to introduce identity cards. Only the employees that entered in the department until 2008, will need this cards. You can get this cards in the administration department.Band 3All content points have been addressed, and the organisation and register of the email are on the whole satisfactory. The range of vocabulary and grammar is adequate, and although there are a number of errors, these are minor and do not prevent th
e message being clearly conveyed.Sample BDear colleagues,I am writing to inform you that everyone being involved in software development will need be provided with an identity card by the service team on next Monday. Due to stolen data the head office decided to prevent unauthorised access to data this way.Regards,Alex ThierryBand 4All points are addressed, and the register and format are on the whole appropriate. The range and accuracy of language are generally good, and the reader would be clearly and fully informed. 

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