SCI修改稿回答审稿人意见范文模板
修改稿回答审稿人的意见(最重要的部分)
List of Responses
Dear Editors and Reviewers:
Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号)。 Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches。 We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are marked in red in the paper。 The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer’s comments are as flowing:
Responds to the reviewer’s comments:
Reviewer #1:
1。 Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)
Response: ××××××
2. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)
Response: ××××××
.。.。。。
逐条意见回答,切忌一定不能有遗漏
针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用:
We are very sorry for our negligence of ……...
We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ……。..
It is really true as Reviewer suggested that……
We have made correction according to the Reviewer’s comments.
We have re—written this part according to the Reviewer’s suggestion
As Reviewer suggested that……
Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion, we have ……
最后特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见:
editor suggestionSpecial thanks to you for your good comments.
Reviewer #2:
同上述
Reviewer #3:
××××××
Other changes:
1. Line 60-61, the statements of “……” were corrected as “…………”
2. Line 107, “……" was added
3. Line 129, “……” was deleted
××××××
We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.
We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval.
Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions
以下是审稿人意见和本人的回复。与大家分享。
从中可以看出,这位审稿人认真读了文章,提出很多宝贵的意见。这些意见
分布在文章的各个地方。我很诧异有人真正读了我的文章。看到这些意见,
我觉得很感激,不是因为接收文章的原因,而是这些意见能真正有助于提高
文章的质量.
从中还看出,回答审稿人问题的“技巧”。
对于回答问题,有的人就是一味反驳,却不加改进.
记得ACS Style Guide里面说,当审稿人问到问题的,哪怕是他理解错误,这
也说明作者这么写,其他读者也会理解错误,引起歧义。因此,作者就是要
修改句子,使表达不引起歧义。
因此:有时间一味反驳,还不如指出具体改进在第几页、第几段。
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Reviewers’ comments:
Reviewer #3: While revising the script, it is to be suggested that author should clearly indicate the aim & scope of the study and while making conclusion, it is to be mentioned how the study is useful for the practical purposes. In addition the following are the few suggestions/comments, which may be included while revision。
1。 Introduction part first para last line, author must avoid to write ambiguous , much work is still ahead, may indicate properly。
2. Author could not demonstrate the reason why, to select the organic compound such as ethyl pyruvate for this study?
3。 Experimental part: It is difficult to understand the in—situ RAIRS experiments with homemade liquid—solid RAIRS cell. More detailed information may be useful for the others those who are working in the area. Photograph of the assembled cell may be included。
4. The description given for the experimental set up (page 4) can be presented by flow diagram instead, as an ease to understand the set up。
5。 Resluts Part (Page 6): "CO adlayers with identical monolayer coverages", the monolayer coverage, is it been performed with some adsorption model? Further, it was suggested that CO—saturated Pt surface, but not mentioned about the saturation experiments。 Is it obtained after 60 min of CO bubbling?
6。 Page 12, 2nd para: The displacement of EtPy by CCl4 flushing, is it confirmed by the EtPy peaks? If so, it has to be mentioned clearly in the para。 Also in the same para, author referred for Fig. 7a and 7b but in the figures, it didn't appear, only figure 7 appeared。 I feel it refers for figure 7, portion A and B, to be corrected。 Similarly, in the text referred the fig 2a, 2b。 etc but on the figure sheet it is mentioned as 2A, 2B .etc. to be corrected.
7。 Page 14, 1st para: 'contamination of the Pt surface by corrosion of o—rings in high concentration EtPy’, but the statement has not been supported by other evidence/literature。
8. Pages 14 through 17: the observed reactivity of various solvents for adsorbed CO on the
Pt surface (figs 3 & 4) has to be discussed more precisely. This reviewer is unable to follow the reason why they showed different reactivity, is it principally due to the organic moieties, or due to the impurities of commercially available chemicals or a mixed effect. It has to be clearly demonstrated, however, the only experiment performed with CO/water? CCl4 would difficult to describe it in detail.
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