怎样写得简洁确切连贯些How to Write More Concisely, Concretely & Coherently
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简洁(Concisely) 、确切(Concretely) 、连贯(Coherently)的英语表达，是科学论文作者致力追求的目标。
¾怎样简洁明快地遣词造句?
¾如何确切具体地传旨达意？
¾怎样连贯自然地启承转合呢?
如何写得简洁一些(How to Write More Concisely)
①利用非谓语动词；
②变定语后置为前置；
③运用名词；
④利用副词；
⑤运用形容词；
⑥运用介词短语；
⑦利用省略；
⑧利用术语表达；
⑨利用缩略间；
⑩删除冗余词语等。
一、利用非谓语动词(Using Non-finites)
1．利用动名词
①After we have carried through the formalism of Lagrange multipliers for 27 variables  with 18 equations of constraints，we will obtain the equations of the three major axes. (一般表达式)
Having carried through the formalism of Lagrange multipliers for 27 variables with 18 equations of constraints，we will obtain the three major axes(简洁表达)
reaction in the shaft
②They proposed that that factory should be fined．For it has seriously polluted the rivers nearby．(一般表达)。
They proposed fining that factory for having seriously polluted the rivers nearby。（简洁表达）
2．利用分词
①The research that is now being carried out in NMR imaging is
extensive and meaningful．(一般表达)
The research now carried out in NMR imaging is extensive and
meaningful(简洁表达)
现在所开展的核磁共振现象研究是广泛的和有意义的。
②The gapped core limbs that are built up from modules are moulded in
cast resin and  separated by ceramic spacers．(一般表达)
The gapped core limbs built up from modules are moulded in cast resin and separated by ceramic spacers．(简洁表达)
由组件组成的气隙磁路铁芯是用树脂浇铸，并用瓷间隔垫分开。
③The proton is the opposite of the electron, since it is a particle of
positive electricity. (一般表达)
Being a particle of positive electricity, the proton is the opposite of the electron. (简洁表达)
质子带正电荷，因此与电子相反。
3．利用不定式
①We have made an effort here to include several different effects
in the 3-πsystem. Our purpose in making this is to allow the three-body state for rescattering. (一般表达)
We have made an effort to include several different effects in the 3-πsystem to allow the three-body st
ate for rescattering.(简洁表达)
我们使3π系统中含有几种不同的效应，以便形成三体散射。
②In our experiment, we used a number of probes. The reason for
that was to eliminate the problems and errors associated with wet chemical analysis. (一般表达)
In our experiment, we used a number of probes so as to
eliminate the problems and errors associated with wet chemical analysis.(简洁表达)
我们在实验中使用了一些探测器，旨在免除温法化学分析法引起的各种问题和差错。

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