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2018-2020年三年中考一模英语试题汇编-书面表达专题
2020年北京市朝阳区中考一模英语试题
书面表达
五、文段表达
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于spring outing怎么读50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
39.假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“垃圾分类”宣传活动,倡议大家在日常生活中正确地进行垃圾分类。为了达到更好的宣传效果,学校将在本月底开展一次英文演讲比赛。你们班的交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他演讲稿上交的时间,并分享你对演讲的一些想法。
提示词语:necessary, waste sorting(垃圾分类), different bins(垃圾箱), body languages
提示问题:
● When should you hand in the speech paper?
● What would you like to share with Peter about the speech?
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If there is anything more that I can help you, please let me know.
Yours,   
Li Hua
【答案】[例文]
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. We need to hand in the speech paper before next Friday. Now I’d like to share some ideas about how I will prepare for my speech.
First, it’s necessary to tell people to do waste sorting at the beginning of the speech. Besides, the key information of the speech is about how to sort waste. For example, put waste into different bins.
To make my speech more attractive, I plan to use some body languages. Hope my ideas will be helpful.
If there is anything more that I can help you, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:本题为书信作文,要求向Peter介绍英文演讲比赛的相关事宜。时态可
用一般现在时。书信格式已经给出,学生只需要写好题目所给要点提示即可。
2.例文点评:例文按照题目所给要点提示,告知了Peter演讲稿的提交时间,以及自己写演讲稿的思路,希望能给予Peter一些启发。文章思路清晰,层次分明,熟练使用连接词使句与句之间衔接顺畅,语义连贯。
3.高分亮点:
短语:hand inprepare forat the beginning offor example
句型:
1Now I’d like to share some ideas about how I will prepare for my speech.would like句型,宾语从句)
2First, it’s necessary to tell people to do waste sorting at the beginning of the speech.it作形式主语)
3To make my speech more attractive, I plan to use some body languages.(不定式作
目的状语)
40.突如其来的新冠疫情(COVID-19 pandemic)阻挡了我们如期回归校园,却阻挡不了我们学习的脚步。“停课不停学”的两个多月里,我们走进了“空中课堂”,渐渐习惯了“线上学习”。我们的成长没有因疫情而停滞。
某英语网站正在开展以“线上学习”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了提高学习效率,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语:make a timetable, take notes, manage time, make progress
提示问题:
● What did you do to learn better at home?
● What benefits have you got from doing so?
Studying online plays an important role during the COVID-19 pandemic. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】[例文]
Studying online plays an important role during the COVID-19 pandemic. In order to learn better at home, I made a timetable to help me make full use of time. I always listened to my lessons carefully and took notes. When I had some difficulties in learning, I asked my teachers for help by QQ or WeChat.
In a word, I have benefited from online studying. I have learned how to manage time and have made great progress in my lessons.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:本题为话题作文,要求围绕“线上学习”这一话题进行写作。根据所给要点,写作内容包括两大部分,即“为了提高学习效率,你做过什么”和“这样做的好处”,在叙述“为了提高学习效率,你做过什么”部分时,时态应用一般过去时,“这样做的好处”部分可用现在完成时,表示过去的动作或状态持续到现在并且已经完成,对现在造成的影响,可能持续发生下去。
2.例文点评:例文按照题目所给提示,对“为了提高学习效率,你做过什么”和“这样做的好处”两部分内容进行了叙述。例文篇幅短而精,行文直入主题,词句达意,语法正确,是一篇合格的范文。
3.高分亮点:
短语:in order tomake full use of timelisten toask … for helpin a wordmake progress in

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