Unit 7 It’s raining !
单元话题满分范文必背
1．写一篇以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题的短文，介绍你家乡的天气。
注意：1. 书写工整，语句通顺，连贯。2. 字数80字左右。
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【答案】例文
The Weather in My Hometown
Hello, everyone! I’m from Nanchang. Do you know what the weather is like here? Let me tell you!
In spring, the weather changes a lot. Sometimes it’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold. In summer, it’s hot. But I like hot weather because I like swimming. Autumn is very nice. It is not
too hot or too cold. I usually go climbing in such weather. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes it is snowy. I often make snowmen with my friends when it snows.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题，介绍自己家乡的天气。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可以从四季不同的天气来描述，介绍四季的不同以及自己的偏爱并说明原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2．在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1)80词左右。
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
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【答案】One possible version:
It’s summer now. The weather in my hometown is very hot and rainy. So it is very wet. People are wearing sunglasses and cool clothes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos. A little boy is eating an ice cream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气，适当添加细
节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.（and连接并列句）
3．假如你是李明，是学校的播音员，你每天为学校播报天气信息，下面表格列出了三天的
天气，请为大家播报。
星期
Friday
sping怎么读Saturday
Sunday
天气
建议
多云，天气凉爽，
适合课后进行室外活动（如打篮球）
雨天，
可以在家做家庭作业，帮父母做家务，和爷爷下象棋
天气晴朗，
适合和家人去公园游玩
参考词汇：cloudy, cool, play basketball, rainy, stay, do housework, play chess, sunny, park
要求：1.词数: 60词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.必须包括表格内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.语句通顺，意思连贯，表达正确；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday.
It’s cloudy on Friday. So it’s cool. It’s a good time to play basketball after class. But on Saturday, it’s a rainy day. You can stay at home to do your homework. And you can help your parents to do housework. Then you can play chess with your grandfather. On Sunday, it’s a sunny day. You can go to the park with your family.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据表格内容为大家播报天气情况；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时，采用第二人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：引起同学注意，播报天气；第二段：具体阐述星期五到星期日的天气状况以及相关的建议；第三段：总结全文，感谢收听。
4．假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友Peter来信，询问你广州四季的天气情况，以及哪个季节最适合来广州旅游。请你根据下列提示给他回一封。
要点提示：
1.冬季稍寒但时间短；
2.春季的广州潮湿多雨，可以看到各种花；
3.夏季稍稍炎热，阳光充足，偶尔会有台风；
4.秋季凉爽干燥，总是有好天气，旅游最舒服；
5.广州很漂亮，期待很快能在广州见到他。
注意：
1.参考词汇：台风(typhoon)；
2.词数：70词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to receive your letter. You know, Guangzhou is in the south of China.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to receive your letter. You know, Guangzhou is in the south of China.

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