精彩英语作文高级表达法荟萃
一、精彩地理风情介绍
1. China covers an area of as large as 9,600,000 square kilometers.
2. The climate is different from place/area to place/area (depending on the area).
3. North of it lies the East China Sea. It’s rich in natural resources.
4. On the average it is 15,000 feet above the sea level.
5. The city stands on the bank of the ChangJiang River.
6. I would also think that the growth population should be brought under control.
7. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years.
8. Our net-school is made up of four parts.
9. 转换表达 (校园环境幽雅,绿树成阴。) It is quiet in our school and there are a lot of trees in it. 转换成 Our school is quiet with a lot of trees in it.
错误表达:In the past ten years the factory has taken place great changes.
语序调整:Great changes have taken place in this factory in the past ten years.
二、精彩产品介绍
1. The product has the advantage of serving many purposes.
2. It is certainly a wise choice to get such a good computer as the Lenovo lap-top. Don’t miss the chance.
3. Small in size and light in weight, it is not only easy to use but also convenient to carry about.
三、精彩人物介绍
1. You are considered one of the best actors in Hong Kong. I really admire you and all the good work that you do.
2. Mei Lanfang is considered one of the outstanding artists in the history of Beijing Opera.
3. At last he made great achievements.
4. He is popular among the students.
5. Liu Xiang was born in a worker's family in Shanghai on July 13th, 1983.
6. He has made up his mind to train harder and achieve greater success in the coming Olympic Games in Beijing.
介绍自己的爱好时常用的词组和句型有: like to do(doing), be fond of, my favourite …is …, enjoy doing等。
业余爱好:游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐
罗列表达:Hobbies: swimming, skating, collecting stamps, pop music.
机械表达:My hobbies are swimming, skating, collecting stamps, pop music.
灵活表达:In my spare time I enjoy listening to pop music and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
四、图表数据描绘法及调查讨论起始语
1. The table indicates that grain, which used to be the main food of most Chinese people, becomes less important in people’s diet, while some high-energy food such as milk and meat has become more and more popular. (表格说明)
2. According to the investigation of the income sources of students, we know… (根据……的调查)
3. From the chart listed above, we can see that… 根据以上所列图表,我们能够看出……
例:From the chart listed above, we can see the number of private cars is getting larger.
Then there are more traffic accidents than before, and meanwhile, air pollution is another serious problem.
From the graph listed above, it can be seen that a growing number of people are learning English now.
4. Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time. (表1说明……)
5. …next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. (紧接着的是……)
6. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
7. Recently, our class has had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.
8. I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purposes of surfing the Internet.
9. I’d like to report to you what we’ve done and what we are planning to do.
10. Yet, opinions of whether we should develop private car ownership or not differ from person to person. (因人而异)
People’s opinions about “ the popularity of western festivals ” vary from person to person. (因人而异)
11. When asked whether they would prefer to live in a city or the countryside, people tend to have different ideas.
(倾向于有不同的观点)
12. Opinions are divided.
13. I don’t think it a true story, but a true reflection of the Chinese families. (一个真实反映)
五、百分比表达法
原句:60% of the students think that fees should not be charged. 40% of the students think that fees should be charged…
修正:Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged … (注意衔接,避免“单句式”表达)
六、描绘“……是一个普遍现象”
1. It's a common social phenomenon that… (……是一个普遍的社会现象)
例:It'ignore the waste behind yous a common social phenomenon that teenagers are addicted to surfing the Internet.
2. The increasing number of private cars is a symbol of modernization of our country (一个现代化的标志)
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