专题15直击2022高考英语专项突破“读后续写”—灾难故事灾难，我们没法控制，但是可以用温暖呵护承受灾难的人……
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阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty. On one shift, I sensed something just before going off duty at 11 am. I put down the tray(托盘）on the table and suddenly it fell off the table. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients were screaming.
I realized that an earthquake was happening. I quickly caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened and pushed her under a bed. And then, I got under another bed myself.As soon as the earthquake stopped, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside. I carried her out and helped her down to the grassland, where several other people had gathered.
Afraid that my other workmates were in danger, I went back inside the building again. When I met Lucy ,our ward sister(护士长），I found her patient couldn't walk. We made a seat for the patient by linking
our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind in our ward(病房）.
Just then, we saw that a man doctor was calling for volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more people. So we went together. The doctor went ahead of us and found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble（碎石），luckily still alive. Suddenly, the aftershock (余震）struck and the doctor ordered us to leave. The brave doctor intended to stay alone and risk his own life to save the nurse.
注意：续写字数应为150词左右。
Paragraph 1: However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together.
Paragraph 2: Later in the afternoon, I had time to look around and saw some destroyed buildings. 【答案】However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together. The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued. Graduall
y and slowly, we lifted the nurse out of the rubble. The doctor put the nurse on his back and walked out of the building with the help of us. Finally, all, including patients, nurses and doctors, were in the safe place.
Later in the afternoon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings. My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition, even some in ruins. At the sight of this, I felt a weight in my chest. Suddenly, the gentle wind danced around me, which made me thought
of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help. It was our teamwork that made a difference. I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients.
【解析】
本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。
2.续写线索：和护士长留下——医生鼓励被困护士——挪开砖头瓦砾——救出被困护士——感慨劫后余生——期待震后重建
3.词汇激活
行为类
①集中在…上：focused on/fix on
②面对：were faced with/face
③继续：continued /keep on
情绪类
①保持镇定：stay calm/keep calm
②感觉有压力：felt a weight in my chest/feel stressed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.（由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued.（由which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3]I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients. （由that引导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）
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Ken Scott kicked off the covers and leapt out of bed at his home in the Rocky Mountain town of Mulla
n, Idaho. He’d just heard on the radio that the nearby Silver Mountain Resort had been blessed w ith nearly a foot and a half of new snow. As an experienced ski addict, he didn’t want to
miss this big golden opportunity. These conditions are what skiers live for.
When Scott reached Silver Mountain’s locker room, he came across his friend Paul, a forme r ski instructor who had also been a regular on these slopes for more than two decades. Both of them were exhilarated. Before setting off, it was Paul’s routine to check his phone tightly fixed inside his parka (风雪外套). For the next hour the pair skied on various runs under a lightly dull sky, making fresh tracks. They were both in a playful mood, laughing as they tackled the steep runs.
Almost immediately, the snow beneath their feet gave way. In a millisecond, Paul realized what was happening. “Avalanche!(雪崩)” he yelled to Scott, who was not far behind. Scott responded. The sudden snow slide caused fear in his voice. “This is happening!” Instantly, both were hit by a mass of snow that would hit and carry them some 500 feet down the mountain. Scott felt it surrounding and enclosing him, moving quickly up his back and over his shoulders, then heavy against his neck. Snow filled the space in front of him and piled up around the whole of him. Paul, too, was swept downhill.
They remembered the avalanche survival lessons they had learned. Keep your head up. Try to swim. Stay on top of the snow. But the snow was too powerful and they felt themselves rolling like a load of clothes in a washing machine. When Scott finally came to rest, he was lying on his left side and completely buried, skis and poles still attached.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Paul was luckier, ending up partially buried and probably surviving.
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Paragraph 2:
Recalling the terrible experience, Scott thanked his friend and the rescue team.
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【答案】Para1
Paul was luckier, ending up partially buried and probably surviving. So fortunate was he that most of the snow had gone over his body and continued down the hill. In such a shallow burial, he began to shake off the snow, scooped snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out. Looking around the world of snow, he desperately shouted Scott’s name but received no trace of responses. Paul unzipped his parka and pulled out the phone to make the emergency call.
Shortly afterwards, the rescue team arrived. With great efforts, Paul and the team located Scott and found him alive in an enclosed space, which ended the unthinkable accident with an incredible survival.
Para2
Recalling the terrible experience, Scott thanked his friend and the rescue team. When buried under snow in the enclosed space, Scott drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend Paul was not buried so deep. He held on to that faint possibility like a rope which could pull him to safety. He painstakingly took only tiny breaths, fighting to stay positive by focusing on this breathing. Time ticked away slowly. Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. In that one-in-a-million chance, they made it. With the dull sky clearing up, both Paul and Scott breathed in the fresh air with abandon, feeling the rebirth of life.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了经验丰富的滑雪爱好者肯·斯科特和好友保罗结伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“保罗比较幸运，部分被埋葬，很可能还活着。”可知，第一段可描写保罗如何脱险，以及脱险后寻好友和寻求救援。
②由第二段首句内容“回忆起那次可怕的经历，斯科特感谢了他的朋友和救援队伍。”可知，第二段可描写当被埋在封闭空间的积雪下时，斯科特的心理活动及获救后的感激之情。
2.续写线索：结伴滑雪——突遇雪崩——寻求援助——获救——感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
1.到达：arrive in/reach
2.遇见：come across/meet
3.集中:focus on/concentrate on
情绪类
1.高兴的：exhilarated /pleased
2.惊恐：terror /panic
【点睛】
[高分句型1].Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. （as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] With great efforts, Paul and the team located Scott and found him alive in an enclosed space, which ended the unthinkable accident with an incredible survival.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）
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Jack still remembers that one morning when he was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Lily. Jack was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first, he thought nothing of it since customers' voice in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.
“Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone shouted.
Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Jack opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Lily, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor through the smoke.pushed
They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Lily stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Jack had no idea what she was doing, but he followed her.
Lily had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Makcik, Malay for auntie. Lily began banging on Makcik’s door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Jack could see many of their neighbors —some still in their pyjamas — running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.
“She might have run for safety like everyone else!” Jack cried. However, Lily refused to give up. “I know Makcik's still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik's daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded the door. “Go downstairs. Go now! Go!”
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Just at that time, Jack noticed the flame was reaching up.
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Luckily, all the neighbors went downstairs and an ambulance came.
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【答案】Paragraph 1: Just at that time, Jack noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He compre-hended the gravity of the situation and held Jane's hand tightly. Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Jack begged Lily to run for safety as quickly as possible. Lily tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Jack burst out crying.

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